jack and the Bean Stalk

I have written the the story of jack 

and the bean stalk and I have

used describing words. I have

tried to use a hook to make my story

interesting it was hard. I think.

Long ago there live a boy name Jack. He lived with his mum and a cow in a small cottage. They were very

poor.  One day jack’s mum said we don’t have enough money so can you go into town and sell him.  So jack did. On the way he met an old man and he said can I have your cow for some beans and jack said why

would I give up my cow for some beans.  Not just beans, magic beans, magic enough to grow up to the cloud over night. So jack took it. When jack showed it to his mother she was furious. So jack’s mum forced Jack to his room and Jack’s mum threw the magic beans outside. The next morning Jack saw

the bean stalk and he climbed it. A few minutes later Jack reached the top.  At the top of the flowers Jack saw a huge! castle and inside was a mother giant. Everything was going smoothly until Fe Fi Fo Fum I smell the blood of an Englishman.

Jack ran and hid. When the giant came home he brought  a golden goose and a golden harp. When the giant fell asleep Jake ran and got the golden goose and the golden harp but the harp sang “Help me master, help me.”

The giant ran after Jack and down the beanstalk. When Jack reached the bottom Jake grabbed an axe and chopped the beanstalk and lived happily ever after.