Friday, 23 May 2014

Making a Plan

I am learning to make a plan before I write. My plan matches my story.  It was easy to write my story because I knew what I was going to write about. I will use a plan again.


Vinuth
when I played pass the parcel
Pass the parcel
and the National
When I played
pass the parcel I was excited because there was three different pass the parcel
Playing pass the parcel is a really fun game.  But on sunday pass the parcel was funnier than last time because me and my sister and dad made up three new pass the parcels.  One of my pass the parcels has a star and certificate.  When the music starts  you go.  When the music stops you stop if the star lands on you you will have a certificate if you have the most certificate you will get a medal

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Well done. You have used ideas in your plan to write your story.